Some people think only best students should be rewarded, while others think we should reward students who make progress.Discuss these two points and give your opinion.

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debate regarding, which type of
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should be rewarded. There are divided opinions, A group of individuals have argued that only the best
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should be rewarded,
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that
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who make progress should be rewarded. Prior to my stance, both
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. Discussing the former
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, that only
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should be rewarded,
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can be said because the best
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have worked really hard to achieve and are usually worthy of getting
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their work , by appreciating them, they would get motivated and they would continue with the good work,
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other
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who don't work hard would
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get motivated.
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, the proponents have their own point of
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like, they say that
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other
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who make progress should be rewarded, because these people are trying really hard to be among the best
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, so appreciating them in any possible would encourage them more, and they would feel that they are going on
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path.
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and offer my position, I support
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, because in the former
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,
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who are trying their level best are appreciated, and everyone cannot be
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but
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they are trying so
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importance should be given to them
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, which would make them really happy.

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