You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear....,

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Dear Adam, I am writing to apologize for
loud
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the loud
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noise
came
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that came
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from my flat on 23th of September. After
few
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a few
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days I
have
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had
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a music competition and I was
practicing
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practising
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. Many children took part
the
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in the
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competition and it required a lot of preparation. And
accordingly
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accordingly,
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I trained a lot to take the first place.
This
may be why you heard the
noise
. I want to apologize for the inconvenience I caused you and
want
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want to
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make up for it. I felt really embarrassed and ashamed when I found out that you could not fall asleep for a long time because of the
noise
.I heard that you recently
movedfrom
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moved from
another city. I do not want you to have a bad opinion of your
neighbors
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neighbours
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. I took first place and tomorrow my family and I are celebrating. I would like to invite you to
this
dinner. I hope
this
can be compensation. I promise that
this
will not happen again, I will try not to make any more
noise
. Please accept my
apologise
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.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Mia Parker
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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