The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
water
cycle in forested and city
areas
. Generally,
this
process is cyclic and composed of six stages in both
areas
, four of them take place above the
ground
and two are under the
ground
.
This
cycle starts from the precipitation process, which remains the same in forested and urban places. After rainfall, there is the process of infiltration, where
water
propagates the permeable topsoil and less permeable subsoil on rocks. As
water
reaches the
water
table, it couples with baseflow and flows to the
ground
, where it couples with
runoff
. In urban
areas
, the processes of infiltration and the level of baseflow are reduced and lead to increased erosion. The stages above the
ground
include evaporation, transpiration and
runoff
.
While
transpiration in forested
areas
remains the most significant amount of
water
, which returns to the air, evaporation and
runoff
are the least considerable.
However
, these stages in urban places are reduced, and there is an increase in pollution of
runoff
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, areas, ground, runoff with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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