The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical  appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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depict
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the amount of time spent performing housework per week in one country
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using three categories of electrical appliances ( washing machine, refrigerator,vacuum cleaner) in the period between 1920 - 2019 . It's clear from the graph that, there was a significant increase in ownership of electrical devices over the years.
Besides
that, the amount of hours of housework per week has gradually decreased .
According to
what is shown, washing machines illustrated a variation pattern. There was a constant increase from 40 per cent to 70% throughout the first 60 years .In 1960, the percentage   slightly decreased in clothes washer by approximately 62 per cent , after that there was a gradual rise In the following 60 years . In terms of other household appliances, vacuum cleaners increased constantly by an average of 20
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until reached
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peak in the year 2000.
Furthermore
,the ownership of refrigerator units represented a sharply increased percentage in the period from 1920 to 1960 . In 1980, refrigerators accounted
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the peak .
To sum up
, the washing machine appears in a fluctuation pattern,
while
the other devices exhibit an increased rate over the year .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • amount of time
  • housework
  • households
  • significantly
  • increased
  • decreased
  • majority
  • refrigerators
  • washing machines
  • televisions
  • advanced
  • dishwashers
  • air conditioning units
  • average
  • tasks
  • cooking
  • cleaning
  • laundry
  • availability
  • easier
  • faster
  • evolution
  • impact
  • distribution
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