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To improve the job prospects, the secondary schools should spend more time teaching communication skills and business and spend less time on history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#job #prospects #schools #time #communication #skills #business #history
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 information about the
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 four major countries namely India, China,
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 and
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 1950 to 2000,
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 about 2050. To give an overview, it
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 that India depicted up ward trend
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 three nations showed down trend
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 15% and slightly escalated another 4% in 2000.
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 nearly 21%.
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 that
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 was highest as compared to other nations.
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 with 10% in 1950 and declined till
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 50 years and after
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 it showed levelled off in 2050.
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 Japan data observed lowest in beginning around 5% and after
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continuously
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 of the period and reached approximately 3%
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