It has been said “not everything that is learned is contained in books”. compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion which source is more important? Why?

The bar chart provides information about the world's four major countries namely India, China, the USA and Japan's population from 1950 to 2000, and future predictions about 2050. To give an overview, it was noticed that India depicted
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in population. To commence with, India, it was observed that, it began at 15% and slightly escalated another 4% in 2000.
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, in the future, it will reach nearly 21%.
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noticed that the population was highest as compared to other nations.
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throughout the whole period. Moving forward in the USA, it embarked with 10% in 1950 and declined till the next 50 years and after that, it
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levelled off in 2050.
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around 5% and after that, it
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continuously declined till the end of the period and reached approximately 3%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • structured knowledge
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical understanding
  • hands-on
  • tailored
  • real-life situations
  • adaptability
  • problem-solving skills
  • foundational theories
  • personal growth
  • learning style
  • field of study
  • collected wisdom
  • complexity
  • well-rounded understanding
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