A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday write a letter to your friend.in your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Sara, I am writing you

this

letter to thank you for accepting to look after my house and my precious Rosa during my absence.

Moreover

, if you need to contact me I am going to be staying in Hilton Milano.

Also

, if something urgent happens you can call me on my new number 0622456789, I will be available all the time

hence

, don’t hesitate to contact me. My dog Rosa needs to be fed twice a

day

Therefore

, I have everything she needs in the lower cabin in the kitchen.

In addition

, a walk every

day

is necessary, I usually take her to the park beside my building. I would like you to water my plants too, the indoor ones need to get water once every two days.

However

, the ones on the balcony need watering every

day

except on rainy days.

Finally

, please clear my mailbox every

day

and let me know if I receive anything important. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Take care. Katty.

Submitted by kaoutar.eljaouhari50 on Sat Oct 21 2023

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8 paragraphs

170 words

8.50

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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