A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday write a letter to your friend.in your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Sara, I am writing you

this

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letter to thank you for accepting to look after my house and my precious Rosa during my absence.

Moreover

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, if you need to contact me I am going to be staying in Hilton Milano.

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, if something urgent happens you can call me on my new number 0622456789, I will be available all the time

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, don’t hesitate to contact me. My dog Rosa needs to be fed twice a

day

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, I have everything she needs in the lower cabin in the kitchen.

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, a walk every

day

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is necessary, I usually take her to the park beside my building. I would like you to water my plants too, the indoor ones need to get water once every two days.

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, the ones on the balcony need watering every

day

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except on rainy days.

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, please clear my mailbox every

day

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and let me know if I receive anything important. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Take care. Katty.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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