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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#countries #schools #student #behavior
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the behaviour of
school
 pupils
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 been getting worse in some regions of the world.There are some reasons
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related to
this
 problem but some solutions have been found. In my opinion,three main
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 cause the way young people misbehave at
school
 nowadays.
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Firstly
,in a modern family,
parents
 tend to be too permissive,so
children
 are used to achieving everything
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 want and they may not accept the demands of the
teachers
,
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 they do not attend to
school
 rules.
Secondly
,there is an issue with managing the classroom by
teachers
.Some
teachers
 cannot control students,
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 the quality of training has been reduced.
Finally
,some of
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youngests
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youngest
 are affected by
celebritis'
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celebrities'
 lives and believe they could be more successful without finishing
school
. I believe student
behavioure
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behaviour
behaviours
 can be improved.
It is clear that
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first
chang
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 must start with
parents
, they should be persuaded about the necessity of reasonable punishment when kids break the rules and
demontrate
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demonstrate
whom
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 actions have consequences.At the same time,
school
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the school
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 can play a significant role
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 training both
children
 and
parents
 to place beneficial restrictions and make
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communication between both groups.
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Simultaneously
,well-known people
such
 as football players and musicians should understand
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improtant
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important
 responsibility that they have to impact
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children
. In conclusion,
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school
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 will carry on facing the problem unless
parents
,
teachers
 and public figures set clear
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rules
 and
simplfy
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simplify
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 behaviour for
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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