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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#countries #schools #student #behaviour
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that
 the behaviour of
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 pupils has been getting worse in some regions of the world.There are some reasons related to
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 problem but some solutions have been found. In my opinion,three main factors cause the way young people misbehave at
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 nowadays.
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,in a modern family,
parents
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 tend to be too permissive,so
children
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 are used to achieving everything they want and they may not accept the demands of the
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,
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, they do not attend to
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 rules.
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,there is an issue with managing the classroom by
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.Some
teachers
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 cannot control students, meanwhile, the quality of training has been reduced.
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,some of
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 are affected by celebrities' lives and believe they could be more successful without finishing
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. I believe student behaviours can be improved.
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the first
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 change must start with
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, they should be persuaded about the necessity of reasonable punishment when kids break the rules and demonstrate whose actions have consequences.At the same time, a
school
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 can play a significant role in training both
children
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 and
parents
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 to place beneficial restrictions and make communication between both groups.Simultaneously,well-known people
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 as football players and musicians should understand the important responsibility that they have to impact
children
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. In conclusion, schools will carry on facing the problem unless
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,
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 and public figures set clear rules and simplify the right behaviour for
children
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.
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