In future all cars, busses and trcuks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is no second thought that in recent times all cars,

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and trucks would be automated and there won't be any need

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. I personally believe that there are more disadvantages than advantages. In

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the majority

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who are struggling in

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they have to find a whole new profession and start from scratch , which is not at all a good sign for society. Adding to

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truck works on the principle of artificial intelligence

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travelling on the streets would be in danger and anyone could get hurt which is very

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, so there are disadvantages more than advantages.

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In future all cars, busses and trcuks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In country where there is a high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hop of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?