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Some people believe the main purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #purpose #education #individuals #society #ambitions
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society. Some
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the
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people
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that
education
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students
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community
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. In the others’ opinion teaching is for personal intentions. In my opinion, schooling is to reach personal aims. On the one hand, nowadays some
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people
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think that instruction is to make individuals available
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public
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. The reason
of
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this
 is that life
lessons
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schools.
For instance
, “how to act in public” is one of the most crucial
lessons
 in public or private schools. With
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 many
students
 learn manners in public.
On the other hand
, many
people
 have completely different opinions about
this
 topic. They think that the
lessons
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learning
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 in
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schools and universities can lead
persons
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 to attain their goals. There are so many
people
 around the world who get
education
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 for their future. Because
education
 is the key
for
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 future
works
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work
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 for human beings.
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,
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education
 can aid
students
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 foreign countries and learn
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, cultures.
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individuals to find jobs easily. In conclusion, for some
people
’s perspectives getting
education
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for
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to teach
people
 how to act in general public,
while
 others think
education
 is motivation for the
students
.
According to
 point of my view,
intention
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 of
education
 is more likely a key to
reach
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 targets for
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preparation
  • beneficial
  • society
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • civic responsibility
  • active participation
  • social initiatives
  • societal issues
  • solutions
  • specialized professions
  • personal growth
  • self-fulfillment
  • passions
  • interests
  • potential
  • talents
  • job prospects
  • financial stability
  • balance
  • meaningful
  • foundation
  • emphasis
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