Many old buildings protected by law are Partl of nation's history. Some think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old building? Should history stand in the way of progress?
Numerous ancient
buildings
and skyscrapers are sheltered by the government owing to being a part of the region’s history. Various individuals think that they should be wiped out and replaced with new facilities. In Use synonyms
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To begin
with, there are multiple reasons and factors why the maintenance of ancient Linking Words
buildings
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, historical value: old Linking Words
buildings
can tell us about the past and how people looked and lived. Use synonyms
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, architectural importance: old and ancient Linking Words
buildings
have unique and different styles of architecture. Use synonyms
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as the Taj Mahal, Rome, the Pyramids, and the Great Wall of China, we can learn and experience the feel of old times. Linking Words
Thirdly
, it increases tourism; historical places attract people from several countries in the world. And it can Linking Words
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provide jobs.
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, despite the beauty of historical Linking Words
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and their value and benefits, a lot of people still stand by their statement, which is the destruction of historical Use synonyms
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. In my opinion, I believe that the authorities should bear the responsibility and improve rural areas Use synonyms
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by providing transportation, healthcare facilities, schools, and markets, and by upgrading water supplies Linking Words
instead
of destroying valuable Linking Words
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To conclude
, history is important for the youth and the future, so asking to destroy it could cause the next generation to be ruined.Linking Words
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