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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of world forest and timber in five different nations namely, South Africa, Africa, Asia, Europe and North America.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of world forest and timber in five different nations namely, South Africa, Africa, Asia, Europe and North America.
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The
pei
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pie
 charts present the proportion of
world
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forest
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 and
timber
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 in Asia,
Africa
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 and three other nations
such
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 as Europe, South
Africa
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 and North
America
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.
Overall
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, the
proportional
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 of
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africa
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Africa
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 was
greatest
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the greatest
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 in the
world
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forest
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 but has
least
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the least
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 amount
to
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of
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timber
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. Europe has occupied approximately equal amount of space in both the diagram shown.
The
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Africa
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 and North
America
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has
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 nearly
equally
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equal
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 percentage
around
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of around
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 26%
in
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of
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 the
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world
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world's
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forest
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whereas
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 in
case
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the case
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 of
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timber
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timber,
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 the ratio
of
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between
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 North
America
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 and
Africa
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 observed was greater than 3:1.
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Europe and South
America
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 has 20% and 23% of
timber
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 and 18% and 16% of
world
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forest
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 respectively. The range of
timber
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 was greater
with
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at
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 21%, as only 13% was shown in the
world
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forest
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.
The
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Asia has almost equal
part
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parts
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 of both
world
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forest
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 and
timber
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 with 14% of
world
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forest
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 and 18% of
timber
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.
The
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North
America
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 was dominant in
timber
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as well as
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 in the
world
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forest
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, forest, timber, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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