Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur?What could be done to tackle these problems?

Nowadays,many schools have an issue with bad youngsters'
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essay will discuss the main problems associated with student's
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and propose some possible solutions to avoid them . I think that one of the main causes of
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spending much of their
time
with
children
.There is no
time
to sit with
children
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because both
parents
are busy at work.
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many students spend their
time
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playing video games ,after school and their
parents
do not know about that.The result of
this
is reduced motivation to study and disrespect to their
teachers
.To tackle
this
problem.mothers and fathers should spend more
time
with their sons and daughters to get them disciplined and make their
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studies. Another reason why students do not behave well is
teachers
themselves .
That is
to say,the majority of
teaches
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do not update their
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and their teaching techniques that are old or very boring.Many pupils do not like
such
lessons.After their
behavior
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changes .
As a result
,disrespect appears between
teacher
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and pupils.To tackle
this
issue,
teachers
should be innovative and develop their methods to be more informative. In conclusion,the absence of
parents
' role
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children
and
poor
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quality of teaching technology
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become
serious
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problem
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.My view is that
parents
should spend their
time
with
children
and
teachers
must improve
better
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lessons
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quality with new technology.
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