The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices is harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Nowadays, with technological advancement many

devices

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like

smartphone

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smartphones

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and tablets

act

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as

source

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of enjoyment for many

individuals

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demerits

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the demerits

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of

this

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approach

such

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as

lack

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the lack

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of focus in studies among children and

promotion

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the promotion

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of

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle

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less physical

activities

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activity

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.

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, explain one merit which acts like a stimulant to change mood among

individuals

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.

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with, there are lots of features in smart

devices

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which attract many

individuals

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to play online games and grab

attention

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the attention

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of many students resulting in

indulge

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them indulging

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in

videogames

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video games

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. All these facilities lead to

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a wastage

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wastage

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waste

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of

time

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and divert focus from studies and important aspects

in

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their lives.

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,

survey

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a survey

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conducted by educational bodies indicated

,

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that, majority

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majority

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the majority

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of school goers are losing

values

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value

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in terms of educational

standard

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standards

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and

also

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observed

lack

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a lack

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of attention problem among them

due to

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overindulgence in online

videogames

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video games

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.

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, observed that

individuals

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are not utilizing their potential due

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this

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reason as they should

also

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require

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to spend

time

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in other important activities like physical exercise and yoga which help them to stay fit and healthy. All these parameters caries

weight age

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weightage

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for growth prospective in terms of good fortune and health. Even though there are many

downside

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downsides

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of

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to

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this

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approach, if these

devices

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are

utilize

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utilised

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in

effective

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an effective

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manner

then

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this

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will help

individuals

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to carve out stress, boost mood from hectic busy

schedule

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schedules

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and

also

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act

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as

source

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a source

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of entertainment.

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, it is

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of parents to give

devices

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to their

ward

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wards

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for

limited

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a limited

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time

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frame only so that they can enjoy their leisure

time

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.

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to

this

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, parental control is essential to overcome

from

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apply

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this

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issue. It is a choice of people how they deal with technological

devices

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.

Over dependant

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of

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on

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these

devices

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leads to

number

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a number

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of issues many detrimental issues among students in

long

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the long

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run.

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, technology

devices

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act

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as

double

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edge sword, on the one hand, if it utilize in

efficient

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an efficient

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manner

then

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these

act

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as stress

buster

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busters

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to change

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the mind

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mind set

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mindset

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for

certain

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a certain

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period of

time

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,

on the other hand

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, if

this

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is uncontrollable

then

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over usage of these

devices

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to play videogames has many drawbacks to individual especially for students.

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careful consideration must be taken by caretakers so that their

wards

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ward's

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future will not impacted badly which have negative repercussion on society collectively.