The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the Stokeford village in 1930 and how it was changed in 2010.
Overall
, the most noticeable changes in the Stokeford village are related to infrastructure, houses and facilities. Regarding the first map, farmlands are located on the west and east of the
road
towards the bridge. To the east of the
road
, we can see gardens having a large house in it. The primary school is close to the gardens in the north, and on the opposite side
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the primary school, there are shops and a post
offices
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.
Additionally
, a pedestrian
road
that connects the gardens and the end of River Stoke in the north exists.
However
, pedestrian roads, farmland and shops were eliminated in 2010.
In contrast
, an increasing number of houses were constructed along the
road
.
Moreover
, in 2010,
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area was changed into a retirement home located next to the
road
in the east. Primary schools and large houses are adjacent to each other, and the post office remained unchanged.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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