You recently traveled by plane from London to Sydney. Write a letter to the airline company about your experience. In your letter: • Describe the purpose of your trip and when you traveled. • Explain what you liked about the flight and the airline's service. • Mention any areas where you feel improvements could be made. • Provide suggestions or recommendations for enhancing the overall travel experience. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am
writting
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writing
this
letter to express my opinion about your
flight
service which I took
this
summer. I took a
flight
from London to Sydney to see koalas for the first time, and some parts of your
serving
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fullfilled
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fulfilled
my satisfaction and some did not. One of your
service
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services
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I liked was the food. I did not expect I could get to eat dinner which was hot and delicious.
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All
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My all
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meal
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the meal
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was cold on a
flight
I used before, which was
dissapointment
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disappointment
for me.
However
, your meal was all hot and the taste was much better than I imagined.
On the other hand
, there was a point to be improved for
more
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a more
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fascinating customer experience, which was the contents service set in front of each seat. I was in need
to search
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how
travelers
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travellers
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get to see koalas in Australia beforehand, but I was not able to
utilieze
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utilise
the internet on the
flight
.
This
is why it would be helpful if you prepare sightseeing information
of
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destinations on
the
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your
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personal tablet. Yours faithfully
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