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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025

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The maps describe the changes occurring
to
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 a
center
 between 2010 and 2025. It is apparent that the
center
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 will experience relatively comprehensive modernization with the modification of some old places and the construction of multiple new
rooms
.
However
, there are a number of areas that are going to remain unchanged. In 2010, the
center
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 had a simple design with seven areas, including two
rooms
, a
reception
 area, a
hall
, a
car
park
 and two gardens. The
rooms
, located in the top left-hand corner of the
center
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, were immediately next to the
hall
 and the
reception
. The
reception
 was directly connected to one of the gardens,
while
 the other
garden
 was to the east of the L-shaped
car
park
. In 2025, the
rooms
 in the northwestern corner will undergo no change, but the
hall
 and the
reception
 will be enlarged
due to
 the relocation of the
car
park
 and the demolition of the eastern
garden
.
As a result
, a new residence
hall
 with a capacity of 20
rooms
 will
also
 be erected, standing next to the old
hall
. The
car
park
 will be moved south-eastwards and shrink,
while
 the old
garden
 right beside it will grow in width. To the front of
this
garden
, a variety of new facilities will be built, namely an IT
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, a canteen and kitchen, two meeting
rooms
, a game room and a music room.
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