Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have different views with regard to the use of aeroplanes to

transport

fruit and vegetables.

While

some people argue that it would be unreasonable to carry them, I believe that

air

transport

generally has more benefits on several levels. On the one hand,

air

transport

plays an irreplaceable role in our daily lives and world economy. The most obvious merit of conveying by

air

is its speed, which means geographical limitations are not a problem anymore. European inhabitants can buy easily any products from Asia by

doing

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apply

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shopping in

food

stores.

As a result

, consumers may get benefit from the variety of

food

choice

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choices

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instead

only

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of only

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local products.

In addition

, thanks to

aeroplane’s

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the aeroplane’s

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speed, the product could be served

for

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consumers quickly in a fresh state.

On the other hand

, I can understand the arguments against

air

transport

for fruit and vegetables. The first reason for

this

view is that the price of

food

will increase because of its freight charges. Actually, if we use larger planes, the costs are not expensive. Another reason for

this

opinion is that aeronautical technology produces pollution;

nevertheless

, the main source of the world’s

emission

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emissions

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is private

car

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cars

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rather than aeroplanes, and

food

also

vital

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a vital

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part of life so it should be carried by

air

and we need to put restriction on non-essential items and encourage essential ones like

food

. In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be good to invest in and develop even more the airfreight of

food

for vital daily resident’s demand.

Sun Oct 22 2023

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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