Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People have different views with regard to the use of aeroplanes to
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fruit and vegetables.
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some people argue that it would be unreasonable to carry them, I believe that
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transport
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generally has more benefits on several levels. On the one hand,
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transport
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plays an irreplaceable role in our daily lives and world economy. The most obvious merit of conveying by
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is its speed, which means geographical limitations are not a problem anymore. European inhabitants can buy easily any products from Asia by
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shopping in
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stores.
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, consumers may get benefit from the variety of
food
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choice
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instead
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only
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local products.
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, thanks to
aeroplane’s
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the aeroplane’s
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speed, the product could be served
for
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consumers quickly in a fresh state.
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, I can understand the arguments against
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transport
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for fruit and vegetables. The first reason for
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view is that the price of
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will increase because of its freight charges. Actually, if we use larger planes, the costs are not expensive. Another reason for
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opinion is that aeronautical technology produces pollution;
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, the main source of the world’s
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emissions
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is private
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cars
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rather than aeroplanes, and
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is
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vital
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a vital
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part of life so it should be carried by
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and we need to put restriction on non-essential items and encourage essential ones like
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. In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be good to invest in and develop even more the airfreight of
food
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for vital daily resident’s demand.
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