The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram describes

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how

sugar

canes change to the

sugar

. There are 7 steps to transform them. First step,

sugar

canes which are row materials are fostered on the field. It takes

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1 to 1.5 years to harvest them.

Second,

the corps are harvested by hand or harvesting machines.

Third,

they are crushed by machines and

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to

the

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sugar

cane juice. Fourth, using a limestone filter, they are purified to extract small

trashes

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. Fifth, to exclude

a

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water in juice, They are heated using evaporators and

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syrup. Sixth,

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crystals are separated from the syrup. At

last

,

sugar

are

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preserved in

big

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pot, and they are dried and cooled.