should private schools receive government funding? give reason for your answer, and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,

children

play a vital role any any

nation

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development

therefore

parents

need to give more freedom as

compare

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to

past

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. I ponder that, it is affirmative development and

I

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my justification will come in

further

paragraphs

along with

some relative examples. To commence with, there are several positive things to give

freem

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free

chindren

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children

.

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Firstly

, they can easily learn new things very easily and with proper knowledge and guidance they become a good citizen.

Secondly

, it is not

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for their

parents

but

also

for the

countries

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economy will

boost

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very easily.

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Thirdly

,

children

can achieve any goal they want to achieve in their lives.

For instance

, the majority of

children

want to become

sport

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person but

due to

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their

parents

are not allow

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therefore

they do not

beocme

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become

a sport person.

Furthermore

,

children

find some kind of extra

responsiblity

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responsibility

and become

independence

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in their

live

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show more

patient

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while

doing something new.

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Additionally

, they can easily fulfil their family

members

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requirement

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ean

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and

lots of money

form

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from

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their passion.

On the other hand

, if

children

get more freedom

then

they miss use of

this

opportunity. They do not focus their study on their school time and easily disattracte and do other

acitivities

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activities

such

as

start

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drinking and smoking which can be not good for their future.

In addition

, they do not like to listen

their

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to their

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parents

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parent's

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advise

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or

teacher

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and waste

of

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their money and time. To give an overview, it is true that,

children

need to require more freedom as

compare

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to

past

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become at that time they

can

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easily learn some new

acitivites

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activities

, do other

works

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work

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and many more.

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,

parents

and

coach

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should keep

on

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an

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eye

that

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on

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what they do in their

life

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lives

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.