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As compared to the past, children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors. Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution.

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To commence with, there are several positive things to give free offspring.
Firstly
, they can easily learn new things very easily and with proper knowledge and guidance they become a good citizen.
Secondly
, it is not only beneficial for their parents but
also
 for the country's economy will be boosted very easily.
Thirdly
,
children
 can achieve any goal they want to achieve in their lives.
For instance
, the majority of
children
 want to become sports person but their parents are not allowed
therefore
 they do not become sports person.
Furthermore
,
children
 find some kind of extra responsibility become independent in their lives show more patience
while
 doing something new.
Additionally
, they can easily fulfil their family members' requirements and lots of money from their passion.
On the other hand
, if
children
 get more freedom
then
 they miss use of
this
 opportunity. They do not focus their study on their school time and easily distracted and do other activities
such
 as drinking and smoking which can be not good for their future.
In addition
, they do not like to listen to their parent's advice or teacher's and waste their money and time. To give an overview, it is true that,
children
 need to require more freedom as compared to the past become at that time they could easily learn some new activities, do other work and many more.
Nevertheless
, parents and coaches should keep an eye on what they do in their lives.
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