Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

Road users sometimes do not follow the

rules

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for them by the

goverment

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government

which can be dangerous for them and others. In that case, formal consequences

is

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an effective way to create a

shock

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therapy.

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with,

Punishment

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is the

tools

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to highlight the

rules

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for achieving the order of road users and guarantee the safety of people's activity

at

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public spaces. It makes the

rules

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become

expilicits

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explicit

so all people can acknowledge that boundaries.

for instance

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is

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the

significancy

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significance

of

stoping

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at the red light is to create order at the

crossroad

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in which without

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rule, we can have

a chaotic movement patterns

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a chaotic movement pattern

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of vehicles accompanied

with

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accident

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accidents

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and

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loss of life.

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formal consequences must be stated to create

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desired goals.

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,

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stricter

punishment

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can create a bolder acknowledgement

oh

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of

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the

rules

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happens

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for people's fear of

punishment

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would draw them back from breaking it. For

this

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proof is the

experimnet

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experiment

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using

a the

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lab rat, which have the same natural

phsycological bahaviour

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psychological behaviour

as human, incorporating electrical

shock

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as

punishment

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concluding that the harder

shock

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can

resulting

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result

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in

strongger

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hesitation of the mice to repeat previous behaviour identified with the

shock

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.

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we can see that stating

a harder formal consequences

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harder formal consequences

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can hold back the potential outlawed from crossing the boundaries. In

conclusion

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as we can draw from prior

conclusion

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conclusions

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is a harder consequence causing bolder fear

to

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breaking the law. In that instance we must use a stricter

punishment

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to enact those

effect

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effects

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then

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we can arrive at the desirable goals.