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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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,monthly figures for drizzle in Kolkata vary considerably,
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 monthly conditions remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August,
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 temperatures are highest in April and May. Between the months of January and May, the average climate in Kolkata rises from its lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average showers in the city
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 rise over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May. Temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months,
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 amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for rain remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in rain, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climograph
  • Average monthly temperatures
  • Average monthly rainfall
  • Trend
  • Fluctuations
  • Hottest month
  • Coldest month
  • Monsoon
  • Wet season
  • Dry season
  • Precipitation
  • Cyclical trends
  • Seasonal trends
  • Temperature patterns
  • Rainfall patterns
  • Correlations
  • Influences
  • Transition
  • Fluctuations
  • Climate characteristics
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