The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they on holiday in 2010
The provided chart illustrates the accommodation preferences of British travellers in 2010 when visiting four different countries. The data is analyzed to highlight the accommodation different choices with the highest and lowest percentages of usage.
In summary, it is evident that hotels were the most favoured choice for accommodation for them,
while
camping and caravanning were the least popular options.
On the one hand, paying for room was the dominant choice in each of the locations, with an Linking Words
overall
average of 50%. England stands out as the highest, with more than half of travellers opting for them.Linking Words
Moreover
, Northern Ireland recorded the lowest of its usage at 10% lesser in percentage than the previous (55% and 45% respectively)
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On the other hand
, caravanning and camping were significantly less preferred. Driving in a caravan had the lowest average usage in for UK and Wales area, with only 0.07 of excursionists selecting Linking Words
this
option. Linking Words
However
, it was relatively more popular in Northern Ireland, making up approximately four times larger than its preferred place to stay. In fact, setting a camp was the least favoured in Scotland and Northern Ireland, both countries recording an average of 8.5%.
In conclusion, an indoor paid option was the overwhelmingly preferred choice for tourists visiting these nations in 2010. Outdoor cheaper options, Linking Words
on the other hand
, were chosen by a significantly smaller proportion of travellers. Linking Words
This
data reveals distinct preferences among them when it comes to references to staying the nights.Linking Words
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