The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram presents the
informarion
related to Correct your spelling
information
making
process of carbonated beverages. Correct article usage
the making
Overall
, there are five stages until it stored
Add a missing verb
is stored
to
the supermarket which are cleaning, heating, mixing, filtering, and packaging.
Change preposition
in
To begin
, the first step is
the raw water
filtered using machine
before adding the softener and chemicals. In order to produce Correct article usage
a machine
the
clean and healthy drinks, the Correct article usage
apply
water
needs to be heated in the electric heaters. After it has been heated, the water
passess
through the cooling pipe to be given carbon dioxide. Entering Correct your spelling
passes
the
stage three where the sparkling Correct article usage
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water
is adding
Wrong verb form
added
syroup
. flavour, and colour. Correct your spelling
syrup
Then
, in the
stage 4, the soda Remove the article
apply
water
is filtering
through the machine and stored in Wrong verb form
filtered
the
bottles and cans. The Correct article usage
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last
stage is packaging
process where both bottles and cans Correct article usage
the packaging
were
stored in Wrong verb form
are
the
different Correct article usage
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box
. The products are ready to be delivered and purchased by customers in the supermarket.Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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