The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram presents the
informarion
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information
related to
making
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the making
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process of carbonated beverages.
Overall
, there are five stages until it
stored
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is stored
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to
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in
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the supermarket which are cleaning, heating, mixing, filtering, and packaging.
To begin
,
the first step is
the raw
water
filtered using
machine
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a machine
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before adding the softener and chemicals. In order to produce
the
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clean and healthy drinks, the
water
needs to be heated in the electric heaters. After it has been heated, the
water
passess
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passes
through the cooling pipe to be given carbon dioxide. Entering
the
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stage three where the sparkling
water
is
adding
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added
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syroup
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syrup
. flavour, and colour.
Then
, in
the
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stage 4, the soda
water
is
filtering
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filtered
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through the machine and stored in
the
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bottles and cans. The
last
stage is
packaging
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the packaging
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process where both bottles and cans
were
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are
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stored in
the
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different
box
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boxes
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. The products are ready to be delivered and purchased by customers in the supermarket.
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