WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams present the
infomations
Correct your spelling
information
relate
to the Wrong verb form
related
stragic
of how wave-energy Correct your spelling
strategy
machine
work and two
option location
for Fix the agreement mistake
locations
place
Wrong verb form
placing
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
To begin
, first of all,wave direction will go into Correct article usage
the chamers
chamers
of the Correct your spelling
chambers
machine
. It will led
to Change the verb form
lead
be led
air flow
inside Correct your spelling
airflow
pull
out Wrong verb form
pulling
two
blades, Correct word choice
and impact
impact
them spin.Wrong verb form
impacting
Additionaly
, Correct your spelling
Additionally
two
blade
were linked with Change to a plural noun
blades
a
electricity generator. Change the article
an
Therefore
, Add an article
the machine
a machine
machine
can Fix the agreement mistake
machines
produces
electricity.more over, Change the verb form
produce
air
outside will come on top of Correct article usage
the air
wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
machine
, make
a Wrong verb form
making
cicular
air to Correct your spelling
circular
makes
Wrong verb form
make
machine
keep working.
Correct article usage
the machine
Secondly
, there are two
locations to install machines which are pros and cons in each options
. The first option is Change to a singular noun
option
place
Fix the infinitive
to place
in
shallow water Correct pronoun usage
it in
where
Correct word choice
which
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
low
price but Add an article
a low
also
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
small
wave. So it has Add an article
a small
few
energy. In the second choice. Correct quantifier usage
little
Machine
will be Add an article
The machine
putted
in Correct your spelling
put
Correct article usage
a depper
depper
water lever. It will cost Correct your spelling
deeper
hinger
price but have more energy because it has Fix the agreement mistake
a higher
Correct article usage
a biger
biger
wave in the deep water lever Change the word
bigger
sea
to Correct article usage
the sea
genarate
.Correct your spelling
generate
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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