All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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cars
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which
runs
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on
fuel
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should be banned and
people
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should start using electric
cars
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.
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, I would argue
cars
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using
fuel
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should not be abandoned as they are
cost effective
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and
ensures
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safety.
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, we can save a lot of money. If we choose to
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cars
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which are petrol, diesel,
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gas driven, it can save us a lot of money.
As electricity
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is quite expensive in some
of
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the
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countries
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as Bangladesh India and Pakistan.
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good for
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the
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national economy as natural resources
helps
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the
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economic growth. So if
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use
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fuel driven
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cars
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it will give
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to their
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economy as more and more
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will
use
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fuel
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.
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, it can save
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amount of time as
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on electricity
is
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slow and
time consuming
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.
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, Developing
counties
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countries
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like Bangladesh, India,
Pakistan
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and Pakistan
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can never think of electric
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as it
cost
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around
hundred
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dollars to charge a
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battery overnight.
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, electric
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are
accident prone
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.Driverless
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runs
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on sensors and often they fail to avoid obstacles.
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result
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people
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might get seriously injured.
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it sounds quite exquisite to
use
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a driverless
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but
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it often
create
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problems for senior citizens as they don’t know how to operate it.
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, electric
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can’t be run
on
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countries like Bangladesh, India, etc as
people
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hardly abide by the traffic rules.Electric
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can often have a collision with
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walking and running here and there. As
people
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lack knowledge of these
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they might walk past
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these
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thinking the driver will stop the
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, but if the sensor fails to detect
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the obstacle
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obstacle
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obstacles
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ahead, an accident is
sure
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shot case here.
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, one Tesla
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failed to detect obstacles ahead and created massive destruction. So, I would argue on the ground that,
people
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should
use
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fuel based
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fuel-based
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cars
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in spite of, electric ones as it is more
cost effective
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and saves
people
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from
hazardous
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a hazardous
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situation
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. Viết cho Husainul Islam Abir
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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