The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
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The diagram illustrates the salmon’s life cycle in 3 different areas, including with
river
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, estuary and ocean. It can be seen that there are many stages of the differentiation of
salmons
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from eggs to mature adults.
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, we can
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see that
salmons
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spend most of their time of their lives in a
river
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and
ocean
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oceans
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. It will pass an estuary only once in their lifetime.
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with, their incubation and transformation period, after mature
salmons
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lay eggs which are transformed into small young
salmons
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in a
river
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. The young
salmons
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stay in the freshwater for a
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to grow up completely.
Then
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, the fish swim through an estuary one time in the adolescent stage to an ocean where it can migrate to many places.
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, in the mature stage,
salmons
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will swim back upstream to the spawning area and lay eggs in a
river
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.
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, the life cycle reoccurs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, salmons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Salmon
  • Spawn
  • Egg
  • Alevin
  • Fry
  • Parr
  • Smolt
  • Freshwater
  • Saltwater
  • Adaptation
  • Physiological changes
  • Habitat
  • Predators
  • Survival
  • Ecosystem
  • Migratory patterns
  • Reproductive cycle
  • Environmental factors
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