The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the salmon’s life cycle in 3 different areas, including with
river
, estuary and ocean.
It can be seen that there are many stages of the differentiation of Use synonyms
salmons
from eggs to mature adults. Use synonyms
Moreover
, we can Linking Words
also
see that Linking Words
salmons
spend most of their time of their lives in a Use synonyms
river
and Use synonyms
ocean
. It will pass an estuary only once in their lifetime.
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oceans
To begin
with, their incubation and transformation period, after mature Linking Words
salmons
lay eggs which are transformed into small young Use synonyms
salmons
in a Use synonyms
river
. The young Use synonyms
salmons
stay in the freshwater for a Use synonyms
while
to grow up completely. Linking Words
Then
, the fish swim through an estuary one time in the adolescent stage to an ocean where it can migrate to many places.
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However
, in the mature stage, Linking Words
salmons
will swim back upstream to the spawning area and lay eggs in a Use synonyms
river
. Use synonyms
Then
, the life cycle reoccurs.Linking Words
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