The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

to complain

you

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about the disfunction of the Garbage collection system in my community .

From

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the past 3

months

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are

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facing

this

issue .The waste management vehicle

supposed

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to come twice every week as per the contract but, now it

his

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happeing

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happening

only once

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apply

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a week and not sure about the day.On

the

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each

visit

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they

are collecting

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either dry or wet waste .

This

is causing a negative impact on the community .People are feeling inconvenient to step out of their houses

due to

foul

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smell from bins.Many citizens are falling sick

due to

garbagge

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garbage

that is

sitting on the

drive way

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.During the rainy

season

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season,

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the water is getting stagnated in the bins which is like welcoming new diseases. I suggest you

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either increase the workforce in that specific department or

handover

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the contract to the best company .I request you to take proper action . look for a quick and prompt response from your end . Yours sincerely, Vikram.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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