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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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bying
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buying
 various products from around the world has been one of the desires of every human being.
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 of time, and
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numerous advances in technology have given
people
 the possibility of having the same products
like
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as
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 other
people
 in other locations.
This
 issue is making
countries
 the same day by day. From my point of view,
this
 phenomenon is
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completely
 a positive development.
To begin
 with, the similarity of
countries
 because of the ability of
people
 to buy the same goods and products is a positive development. Psychologically speaking,
people
 may feel relaxed and
relief
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 in
this
 way.
In other words
, having a sense of equity with other
people
 across the globe can really lift the spirit of mankind. To illustrate the point, consider a person who is living in a developing
country
.
This
 person will see other peers in a developed
country
 who are leading their
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 with high standards.
This
 condition can make him/her depressed because they may make
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comparisons
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 between themselves and the peer groups in a developed
country
. If they have the possibility of buying ,
for example
, the same shoes
like
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 other
people
 living in a better
country
, they will feel way better about his/her situation. Another reason why the similarity of
countries
 because of
people
 having the ability to buy the same items is that the necessity of immigration to other
countries
 will decrease dramatically. To
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explain
 more, many immigrants decide to immigrate to
a better
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better countries
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countries
 because the economic, social, and political situations of their own
country
 leave them with no alternative but to immigrate. In fact, in high probability, If these
people
 had a good standard of living, they might not decide to go to a better spot in the pursuit of
better
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 life. So, If
countries
 become similar to each other, many
people
 will not immigrate to other places, which exerts a great deal of pressure on them. In conclusion, I tend to think that the similarity of
countries
 these days which can be attributed to the modern world is a positive issue because the mental conditions of
people
 in less developed
countries
 may improve and the rate of immigration may decrease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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