25.The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the
amount
of individuals who went to the different types of museums in London from June to October Change the quantifier
number
of
2015.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the number
of visitors varied significantly during the months
, while
in the History, National and British museums the quantity increased until August and then
decreased. Science museum
started to drop from
September.
In June, the most visited Change preposition
in
museum
is the Science museum
with approximately 430,000 visitors, in the next Capitalize word
Museum
month
the number
fell by around 30,000, in August it grew again by 10,000, in the fifth month
it rocketed to 500,000, but in the last
month
it went down to 300,000. The British museum
started the period with nearly 420,000, it jumped rapidly to more or less 710,000 in August, but it started to decline in September and October to under 600,000 and 450,000 respectively.
The History Capitalize word
Museum
museum
remained the Capitalize word
Museum
number
of visitors during the two first months
, which
was approximately 400,000, in August it reached its highest point at 600,000 but Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
it started to drop to 390,000 and 250,000 in the last
two months
. Finally
, the National museum
, had during the Capitalize word
Museum
months
June
, Change preposition
of June
July
around 200,000 people, it climbed by 100,000 in the next Correct word choice
and July
month
, afterwards, in September it went down to 200,000, in the last
month
the number
of people was still decreasing, ending the period with 180,000.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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