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27.The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

27.The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph displays the
sales
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 of consoles, handheld
games
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, online
games
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 and mobile
games
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 from 2000 to 2006 in the world.
Overall
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, the
sales
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 of consoles have decreased over the
years
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,
while
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 the other three
games
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 increased over the
years
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, and handheld
games
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 were the most bought. Handheld
games
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 started the period with $11
billion
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, which was the highest amount, and
this
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 was maintained during the seven
years
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. The amount was rising moderately every
year
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, where in 2001 had just over $12
billion
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, the next 3
years
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 it maintained at approximately around $15 with a small rise every
year
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, in 2005 had the same amount as 2004, in the
last
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year
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 it jumped sharply to nearly $17,5. Another important feature is that console
sales
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 dropped every
year
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. In 2000, it had approximately $6
billion
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 in
sales
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, in the next three
years
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, each
year
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 it went down by $0.5
billion
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, in 2004 it had the same
sales
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 as in 2003, which was $4.5
billion
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. In 2005 it fell dramatically by more or less $2
billion
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, with only around $2.6, and it ended the period being the biggest loser with only $2.5
billion
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 in
sales
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, years, billion, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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