28.The graph below shows the answers to a survey about the most important factor needed for the success of a business by people in the USA and Europe. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

28.The graph below shows the answers to a survey about the most important factor needed for the success of a business by people in the USA and Europe. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the responses to a questionnaire related to the principal factor that will cause success in business in the United States and
Europe
.
Overall
, the most chosen answer is the type of business for both the
USA
and
Europe
,
while
the ones that have the least votes are the external factors. For the option “type of business”, around 38% of individuals in the United States chose it,
while
Europe
had approximately 1% less, being the most selected compared to the other alternatives. Personality ranks second in
Europe
with a percentage of just above 35%,
while
in the
USA
it ranks second with 20%. The economy had a proportion of nearly 22% and 19% in the United States and
Europe
respectively. The political situation in the
USA
had been selected by around 15%,
while
Europe
is set to be the biggest loser with only more or less 3%, being the one with the least votes. External factors in both countries had the same percentage, which was 5%, which is the lowest in the
USA
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • main trends
  • breakdown
  • significant differences
  • comparison
  • factors
  • important
  • popularity
  • valued factors
  • preferences
  • implications
  • regional differences
  • cultural context
  • economic context
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