30.The bar chart shows the electricity consumption and cost of various household devices per year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart displays the proportion of

dependents

in

Japan

,

Korea

,

China

,

Indonesia

and India in the years 2000 and 2005.

Overall

,

Korea

and

Japan

have the biggest

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between both years. The other significant feature of

this

chart is that

China

and

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Indonesia

are very similar. India had a percentage of around 38% in 2000, which was 2% more than

Korea

in second place, which only had a proportion of approximately 36%

Indonesia

and

China

had the same rate,

that

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was 35%,

while

Japan

’s values was the lowest in 2000, which only had a rate of 31%.

Furthermore

, the

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average was nearly 33%.

Japan

increased its percentage of

dependents

to approximately 48% in 2005, but

Korea

made significant gains

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them by

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their value by nearly 12% to just under 48% ranking as the second country with more

dependents

.

Then

is followed by

China

and

Indonesia

with more or less 37% and 36% respectively,

while

India’s value dropped by 5% to nearly 33%.

Finally

, the

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average grew

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7% to just over 40%.The bar graph displays the proportion of

dependents

in

Japan

,

Korea

,

China

,

Indonesia

and India in the years 2000 and 2005.