The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to

the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate a college building of nowadays and future plans.  Looking at
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perspective, it can be seen that students will be provided
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more parking space. What is more, there will be more classrooms and the shop will be added.
According to
the data, the garden and the footpath will be removed and replaced by the shop and by one more classroom. The toilet will be moved to the top of the construction. It is
also
worth mentioning that students will have more space for leaving their cars, exactly 6, compared with today.
However
, the bus stop and the road will stay unchanged. As can be seen from the maps, the lunch area will be between the store and the classroom,
instead
of on the corner. As for the reception, it will be replaced to the left of the building and will occupy more space as the plan for 2020
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • architecture
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facade
  • landscaping
  • expansion
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • pedestrian
  • vehicular traffic
  • demolition
  • construction
  • recreational areas
  • commons
  • atrium
  • courtyard
  • upgrade
  • sustainability
  • commute
  • ingress
  • egress
  • blueprint
  • survey
  • layout
  • zoning
  • modernization
  • conservation
  • integration
  • footprint
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