Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance? What is your opinion?

In
this
present world, the
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technology
and how it
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to our lives is constantly on the rise. Even a
lot
people
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of people
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say that it is not
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indispensable
for
this
kind of humanity. The argument that whether
computer
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computers
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are more a hindrance than a help in today's world, or whether
this
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these
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tools
are indispensable in
daily
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the daily
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life
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lives
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of many
people
.
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essay will discuss both perspectives and present arguments for
computers
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us with the opportunity to handle numerous
tasks
. Opponents of
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computers
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is
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a negative impact
may
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and may
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cite potential
dowsides
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dangers
in
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terms
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of
this
technology. They could argue that
this
device
prevent
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prevents
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people
from fundamental
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.
For instance
, ChatGPT is a tool that will
anwser
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answer
a
lot
of asks, thereby making them cannot think and handle
themselve
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themselves
tasks
faster.
This
lead
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to the fact that
people
cannot handle without
this
device.
This
is why it can be debated that
computers
are more hindrance than
help
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a help
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in
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the currently
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currently
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current
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world.
Nevertheless
, I hold the belief that if we correctly use
computers
, we will
access
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have access
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to useful information, which should help us
accquire
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acquire
helpful knowledge.
For example
,
computer
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computers
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enable students to access to
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knowledge, and
thus
they
could
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can
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find a
lot
of information which help them learn that knowledge before going to classes.
Consequently
,
this
can stop students from
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depended on
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tutors.
Therefore
,
this
makes it clear that a
lot
of
people
find it useful to handle numerous
tasks
. To summarize, the two sides of the argument concerning whether
computers
can
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a indispensable
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an indispensable tool
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tools
.
However
, after
thorough
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analysis of both sides,
it is clear that
the idea of
computer
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computers
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is a hindrance
tools
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to tools
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cannot supported. It is
therefore
predicted that
this
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these
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tools
will be greater than the negative effects, and because of
this
,
computers
will be substituted for our
tasks
.
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