You have invited a friend to visit you next month. Unfortunately, you are not able to meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Apologize for the change of plans •Explain why you are unable to meet him/her •Suggest another time for him/her to visit

#friend #visit #month #•apologize #change #plans #•explain #•suggest #time

Dear Sara, I hope you're doing well. It has been

long

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time since we met ,and I was very excited about your visit to my house. Unfortunately, we have to make some changes

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our plan. I am feeling very guilty about

this

sudden change in our plan . I am really sorry dear bu,

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but

I 've no other option. My mother got sick yesterday and I am staying with her in hospital. Doctors told

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them that

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she

will

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stay under observation for two more weeks. I am hoping things will get normal soon. I think if

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come next month that will be wonderful because my family is organising a family function at home. You can have

some

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good time if you

will be

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free. The best thing will be that there will

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lot of street food at

function

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that you like. I look forward to

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you soon. Yours loving , Gill.

Submitted by gill.g24 on Mon Oct 23 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

155 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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