The following diagrams show how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house

The following diagrams show how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house
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The illustration below depicts the intricate
working
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workings
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of a pellet stove and a boiler for heating up a
house
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.
Overall
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, both
the
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apply
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process
involve
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involves
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combustion
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the combustion
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of wooden
pellets
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and the heat produced by
this
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action is used
for raising
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to raise
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the
temprature
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temperature
of the
house
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. In a pellet stove, wooden
pellets
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are collected in a fuel hopper. The whole machine is controllable and
supervisies
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supervises
the amount of
pellets
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entering the combustion chamber via fuel feed. As the fuel burns the hot air produced is circulated throughout the
house
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with the help of
combustion
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a combustion
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fan. The ash produced is collected in a pan and the smoke generated is extruded by an exhaust duct from
rear
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the rear
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panel. In a pellet boiler,
the
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apply
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wooden
pellets
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are added
into
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to
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the
furnance
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furnace
for producing
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to produce
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heat. An underground cold water line is connected to the
furnance
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furnace
which
while
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passing through it becomes hot. The hot water line is supplied to all the rooms of the
house
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and they are attached to the heaters respectively. There is a provision of an ash receptacle and smoke stack for
by products
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by-products
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, pellets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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