Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Groups of youngsters dedicate

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most of their daily time to using their

smartphones

. There are a plethora

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causing

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.

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trend has both benefits and drawbacks, and I will explain them in

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essay. Using

smartphones

has been increasing among the young generation. One of the reasons is contributing

with

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their friends’ chat groups or online

games

is easy with mobile phones.

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reported by the BBC in 2019, mentioned that the average number of hours has been spent on online

games

has soared by 80 per cent since

smartphones

were invented. Every new transformation has some advantages and disadvantages. On the positive side of

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chance, it can be seen that knowledge of the new generation is expanding in every subject.

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, children gain a significant amount of skills by playing online

games

, like creativity, imagination and problem-solving.

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new

expertises

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align

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with a successful career in

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future.

On the other hand

,

smartphones

bring enormous side effects. Undoubtedly, spending substantial time on utilizing

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phones inevitably links to health problems. A prime example of the health issue is eye difficulties in children. The more hours

spend

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on phones the more every problem they have, like decreasing eyesight and eyesore.

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,

using

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smartphones

is going up among children.

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this

tool opens many doors for them, like communicating with their peers easily and participating in many online

games

. Albeit, the prons of

this

change would be a new generation with creative minds and

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to

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the issues in an efficient way,

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the health issues caused by

this

are irreversible, like declining the vision of eyes.