Some people believe that if a child commits a crime, he or she should be punished, while others think it is the child’s parent who should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that crimes should be eradicated.
While
some people believe that the child
should be punished for their crime
, others believe that parents
should be punished. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain my support for the former view.
The people who advocate that parents
should be punished for child
crime
argue that the children are influenced by parents
and they have the responsibility for their child
's activities. some parents
are not providing
attention to their Verb problem
paying
kinds
and their behaviours. Fix the agreement mistake
kind
For instance
, one of the recent studies indicates that the
children are influenced by their Correct article usage
apply
parents
, and domestic violence is the major reason for child
crimes. A child
who grows up in a better environment has less possibility of anti-social activities than a child
who grew
up in a worse environment. Wrong verb form
grows
For example
, the kids from the parents
who use drugs have more chances to use drugs from their experience.
However
, a child
who committed a crime
and punished their parents
is not a sign of a good society. The punishment should be delivered with the intention of correction. If the parents
are punished the kids will not correct. For example
, The baby serial killer in India, who has killed more than two kids does not have any relation with his parents
. Later the scientific panel discovered that it child
had psychological instability.
In conclusion, there are people who believe that the childs
are influenced by Correct your spelling
children
parents
and their responsibility is to correct them. However
I believe that there is no relation between Add a comma
However,
child
crime
and parents
. most of the child
crimes are spontaneous.Submitted by ck.manshad on
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