The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Numerous people come with the idea that the
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of cell
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should be prohibited in some
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as cigarettes are restricted in some
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. In
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essay, I will explain why I tend to agree with
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statement. On the one hand, in the professional field, the
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of
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in the workplace is already banned in some companies
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smoking is prohibited, especially in the plants.
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, Jaguar Land Rover's company has a policy for their employees, exactly the factory worker, to never
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phone
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working, because it is too dangerous as they are surrounded by lots of sensitive tools and cause harmful reactions if they
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hardware like
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phones
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inside the factory.
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the safety reason, the privacy reason
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plays a significant role in
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policy. The company is afraid of their staff taking pictures with their mobile
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. The corporation itself does not want their secret of work, or whether the products used are known by the public, especially by the competitors.
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, excluding career things, the
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of
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should be forbidden in entertaining
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like a cinema,
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as smoking.
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can be seen in all of the
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theaters
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in
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entire world that already state a warning
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the beginning of the
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to never activate the
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while
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watching, or even record anything with the cell
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.
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issue is related to the copyright of the
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itself and
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good idea, because the people who watch the
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at the cinema pay
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ticket well, so it must be unfair if the recording of the
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gets out to the public without paying at all. In conclusion, the utilization of mobile
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can be banned as smoking in numerous
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, especially in
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work or public
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, yet it must consider the concern and should make a wise policy about it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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