The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Numerous people come with the idea that the

use

of cell

phones

should be prohibited in some

places

as cigarettes are restricted in some

places

. In

this

essay, I will explain why I tend to agree with

this

statement. On the one hand, in the professional field, the

use

of

phones

in the workplace is already banned in some companies

as well

as

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smoking is prohibited, especially in the plants.

For instance

, Jaguar Land Rover's company has a policy for their employees, exactly the factory worker, to never

use

their

phone

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phones

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while

working, because it is too dangerous as they are surrounded by lots of sensitive tools and cause harmful reactions if they

use

hardware like

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smartphones

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phones

inside the factory.

Besides

the safety reason, the privacy reason

also

plays a significant role in

this

policy. The company is afraid of their staff taking pictures with their mobile

phone

. The corporation itself does not want their secret of work, or whether the products used are known by the public, especially by the competitors.

On the other hand

, excluding career things, the

use

of

phones

should be forbidden in entertaining

places

like a cinema,

such

as smoking.

This

can be seen in all of the

movie

theaters

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in

this

entire world that already state a warning

in

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at

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the beginning of the

movie

to never activate the

phone

while

watching, or even record anything with the cell

phone

.

This

issue is related to the copyright of the

movie

itself and

a

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good idea, because the people who watch the

movie

at the cinema pay

the

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ticket well, so it must be unfair if the recording of the

movie

gets out to the public without paying at all. In conclusion, the utilization of mobile

phones

can be banned as smoking in numerous

places

, especially in

the

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work or public

places

, yet it must consider the concern and should make a wise policy about it.