the charts below give information about levels of education in glasgow in 2010
The bar chart provides information about levels of education in Glasgow in 2010 and the pie chart elaborates all
ages
of enlightenment by gender groups.
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Overall
, the maximum point of education level was a university degree which was 76% between the 24-35 age groups, Linking Words
while
the minimum number of it was 3% of school degree by elderly Linking Words
people
. The proportion of education level by gender changed slightly, Use synonyms
however
the figure for Linking Words
people
who do not have qualifications remained stable.
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Firstly
, the percentage of humans studied in university was approximately over 70% in three age groups, accurately these Linking Words
ages
were below 50, and Use synonyms
this
number gradually decreased. Linking Words
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degree
could not increase more than 20% and it had the lowest figure Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
of
the chart for Change preposition
on
people
who were over 75. The quantity of group of the population who did not have any qualifications remained the same, 9% in 16-50 Use synonyms
ages
, but Use synonyms
this
stability replaced increasing process at growing Linking Words
ages
.
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Secondly
, the proportion of women and men in each section was nearly 30%, Linking Words
however
, it was more about women than men. The number of Linking Words
haven’t
any qualifications by Rephrase
have
people
did not change and stood at 33%.Use synonyms
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