The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides data on the proportion of inhabitants of five Australian cities who bought fresh or
instant
coffee
and what percentage of them preferred café for tea or
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks.
Overall
, people in four towns of Australia were more passionate about going to café for drinking,
while
in
Adelaide
, buying
instant
coffee
was more popular.
Also
, in all five cities, the popularity of buying fresh
coffee
was less than
instant
coffee
.
According to
the bar chart, going to cafés was the most popular among inhabitants of towns except in
Adelaide
. Melbourne and Hobart were the first rank by a little more than 62% of residents. Sydney was comparably high at just over 60%, followed by Brisbane at over 55%, and
finally
Adelaide
at under 50%.
Adelaide
was the only city where people bought more
instant
coffee
by almost 50%. In Hobart, fresh
coffee
purchases stood at a little less than 55%, higher than Brisbane at 52%, Melbourne at 48% and
lastly
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Sydney at just over 45%. As the bar chart shows, fresh
coffee
sales were under 50% for all cities. Brisbane and
Adelaide
had a minimum amount of sales by about one-
third,
Hobart and Melbourne were slightly more by 40%.
Moreover
, the maximum amount of sales belonged to Sydney by approximately 45%.
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