The maps show the layout of school in 1985 and at the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show a layout of buildings at school in 1985 and how it
is
changed in the present day. Verb problem
has
Overall
, the most noticeable changes are related to an increasing number of buildings, transforming the road
and narrowing the playing fields
.
In 1985, there are
two Wrong verb form
were
car
parks which are
bigger and smaller in size. A big Wrong verb form
were
car
park
was located in the south of the exit and entrance gate. The big car
park
was surrounded by the road
which then
lead
to the playing Wrong verb form
led
fields
. Two classroom buildings, classrooms and classroom block, were constructed next to the playing fields
particularly in the east and west of the road
respectively. A small car
park
, which located
adjacent to the classrooms that have no storey, is Add a missing verb
is located
in
the opposite side of Change preposition
on
library
.
Add an article
the library
However
, classroom
block now is constructed with three storeys because Correct article usage
the classroom
an
increasing number of students up to 800 people. Many new infrastructures have Change preposition
of an
also
built
which are Add a missing verb
been built
pool
, fitness centre and learning resources centre. Correct article usage
a pool
Learning
resources centre is in the south of the office, and it has Correct article usage
The learning
computer
room in it. Correct article usage
a computer
Furthermore
, while
the playing fields
decreased in size, the car
park
is
changed in form from Unnecessary verb
apply
semi-rectangle
Correct article usage
a semi-rectangle
into
Change preposition
to
the
semi-circle. Correct article usage
a
Additionally
, the main road
just has one straight line in route in the north of car
Correct article usage
the car
park
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, fields, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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