Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spot light. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion.

Famous people make a high income from

media

attention and they have chosen to share their

live

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publicly.

Celebrities

have no right to argue when their private

live

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getting intruding

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are intruded

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by

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media

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the media

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. In my opinion,

influencers

must have their own private daily routine away from their work.

Therefore

,

fans

and

media

in general have to respect that.

Firstly

, making a living from social

media

should be recognised as a job just as any other job. Companies and co-workers are always respecting the

employee

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time after

the

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apply

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working hours,

this

should be applied

for

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celebrities

. Social

media

influencers

spend more than seven hours posting and creating content, but their work never

end

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, they still have to face the

media

for the rest of the day. In my viewpoint,

governemts

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governments

should have rules about violating

celebrities

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celebrities'

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privacy and they must have a normal life.

Secondly

,

paparazzis

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and

fans

must never post the

celebrities

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celebrity's

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photos without asking for

permision

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permission

.

Influencers

may spend time with their family or friends and they prefer to be away from the

media

attention.

However

, famous people should always respect their

fans

. Personally, I believe that

influencers

have a difficult daily routine but they have to be polite to anyone, that not only makes them friendly but

also

they get more famous by respecting

fans

. In the end,

celebrities

must have their own privacy away from their

works

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just as the other jobs, where companies and co-workers respect the

employee

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employee's

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time.

Paparazzis

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Paparazzi

should have limits and they must never post any famous

people

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people's

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pictures without their

permision

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permission

.

However

,

influencers

should always be polite

with

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their

fans

.