Some people think that secondary or high school student should be taught how to use money management, as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

A few people have opined that
teenagers
should be lectured on how to spend
money
wisely because it is a crucial skill in life.
This
essay agrees with the opinion above because when
children
are exposed to financial management, they
would
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know how to spend their cash wisely and avoid unnecessary spending.
To begin
with, training
teenagers
on
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finance management will allow them
cultivate
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the habit of
savings
in the future.
Moreover
,
children
who are exposed to early
savings
have the tendency to be smart spenders.
Also
,
teenagers
who have developed the hack of
savings
will know how to handle rainy days.
For example
, Bimbo a Nigerian who lives in Canada, at the age of 32,
she
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was faced with a financial problem
in
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December 12th, 2003 and because of the
money
she had saved, she was able to use it to solve the problem .
Hence
,
savings
can help people in life and the
children
exposed to it at an early stage would love the benefit.
In addition
to the above,
teenagers
who are lectured on cash management would have financial discipline.
Likewise
, they will be able to determine if buying a certain thing is necessary or not.
Moreover
, exposing a child to early
savings
can make the child lose interest in buying unnecessary things. A case in point is
Mr.
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Tunde, a Lecturer at The University of Ibadan who lives in Ibadan. Anytime he goes
for
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shopping at the ShopRite supermarket in Ibadan, he always
make
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sure he has a second thought on things to be purchased so as not to buy unnecessary things and have some
money
to save. As
such
,
children
who can manage
money
inflow, are wise
spender
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. In conclusion, training a child on how to manage his/her
finance
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will help him/her avoid spending lavishly and
also
embrace saving for rainy days.
Submitted by Mabel on

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