Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Aircraft transportation of fruit and
vegetable
to some
countries
have
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condition to grow plants are increasing
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years. Some people find
that is
a good idea
although
others oppose it.
This
writer strongly agrees with the statement and will discuss it below. Carrying fruit and
vegetable
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to
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countries
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the
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unsuitable
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to grow plants can bring economic
benefit
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benefits
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to lots of
countries
. It can provide to the
countries
that export fruits and
vegetable
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.
Moreover
, it creates jobs, generates income and
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to the growth of the economy.
However
, it
also
brings some disadvantages to the
environment
especially the cost and the fuels
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in
period
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of
transporting
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. The
environment
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impact can be suffered from the waste of
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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. When it sets off and carries food in the sky, it
also
wastes
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spoil into the
environment
and causes some disease.
Moreover
, the cost of transportation is immensely expensive.
This
cost is passed on to consumers, making fruits and vegetables more expensive for consumers . In conclusion, exporting fruit and
vegetable
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to
the
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countries
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the unsuitable
condition
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conditions
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to grow plants can bring economic
benefit
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benefits
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to lots of
countries
.
However
, it has some bad causes that
damages
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to
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the
environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Perishable
  • Food security
  • Exporting
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Expensive
  • Consumers
  • Logistics
  • Efficient
  • Accessibility
  • Sustainability
  • Global trade
  • Climate change
  • Market demand
  • Cultivated
  • Out of season
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