Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport foods and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A controversial discussion point is whether
aircraft
should be used to deliver
fruits
and vegetables to
nations
where those plants hardly grow or not.
While
the author advocates
this
idea because of fast delivery
as well as
high capacity, some people
argues
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that they should be used for other purposes. It should be acknowledged that
airplanes
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are now considered the best transportation. Thanks to their state-of-the-art engines,
airplanes
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are capable of moving at
extremely
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high pace.
Therefore
, goods, commodities and even inhabitants can reach their final destinations, especially overseas, quicker by planes than any other means of
transpor
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transport
.
Hence
,
fruits
and plants can be immediately delivered to the place where they are most needed
while
staying in
best
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conditions.
However
, critics justifying the use of
aircraft
in other areas argue that the cost of a flight can be exorbitant, especially when
travel
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in short distance.
Instead
, they believe that using traditional
transports
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transport
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including cars, trains,
lorries
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and lorries
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would be more suitable for transporting necessities
whereas
planes should only be used for
human-travelling
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human travelling
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.
Nevertheless
, the top priority of the government is to support residents immediately when they are in need,
thus
, a little too expensive can still be accepted when
the
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punctuality is required.
Besides
,
this
method can
also
be useful in improving the relationships between
nations
, especially when they are far away from each other. Take Viet Nam and Cuba as an example, since the distance between these two
nations
are
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quite far, the only way to support each other is through flights containing
specialties
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. It is the opinion of the author that
aircraft
proves
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to be the most successful when they are used to transport plants
as well as
other
fruits
and vegetables. Since they are enormous, spare spaces could be used for holding boxes of vegetation. Thanks to
this
,
large
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amount of essentials can be transported at a time.
This
can be extremely helpful in improving the shipping industry.
While
aircraft
can be used
for
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many areas, a lot of people, including myself, believe that it is the best way to use planes to transport vegetables and
fruits
to the
nations
where these flora are out of
seasons
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season
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.
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