Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both view and give you own opinion.

Transporting fruits
ang
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and
vegetables to insufficient countries by plane recently
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popular. Despite a significant number
people
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of people
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who follow the view to produce
a genetically modified plants
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genetically modified plants
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, the writer contends that
this
action helps to provide adequate staples within
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time
.
Airline
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is undeniably know
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for
the
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swift speed and capacity when it moves from place to place. The quantity and efficiency
whom
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delivery by planes gives to is
therefore
better and more stable than other alternatives. Without it, the government has to take rough action for importing fresh plants by cargo or railway.
This
might not only take a long
time
to convey but its possibility of failure is
aslo
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also
significant. Take Britain
for example
, where the land is geologically inconvenient to plant durian or other tropical fruits, so they make a decision
of
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soucing those from other nations
is
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in
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Asia,
where
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which
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is well-known for planting many of them. Another belief is that
reasearching
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researching
and producing the same but suitable genetically modified plant breeds can bring
to
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better
resulr
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results
result
compared to
bying
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buying
from abroad. It is true, but the duration
for
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of
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this
effort is
noticable
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noticeable
and the result will not come out
at
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the first try.
Instead
, importing overseas shortens much of
time
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the time
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and effort
foe
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for
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the government and
citizen
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citizens
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to easily get.
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,
for
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a mutant watermelon that could grow well in
cold
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a cold
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area has
spent
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about 2 years to achieve,
whereas
delivering from
specialized
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region by plane
just
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take
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only around one or two months.
To conclude
, owing to the short
time
consumption and higher capability, bringing vegetables from abroad by airship can be considered as an acceptable option, in spite of
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a noticeable
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number of people who choose to
plants
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plant
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genetical
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vegetables.
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