Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both view and give you own opinion.
Transporting fruits
ang
vegetables to insufficient countries by plane recently Correct your spelling
and
becomes
popular. Despite a significant number Wrong verb form
become
people
who follow the view to produce Change preposition
of people
a genetically modified plants
, the writer contends that Correct the article-noun agreement
genetically modified plants
a genetically modified plant
this
action helps to provide adequate staples within considerable
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a considerable
time
.
Airline
Add an article
The airline
is undeniably know
for Change the verb form
is undeniably known
the
swift speed and capacity when it moves from place to place. The quantity and efficiency Change the word
its
whom
delivery by planes gives to is Correct word choice
that
therefore
better and more stable than other alternatives. Without it, the government has to take rough action for importing fresh plants by cargo or railway. This
might not only take a long time
to convey but its possibility of failure is aslo
significant. Take Britain Correct your spelling
also
for example
, where the land is geologically inconvenient to plant durian or other tropical fruits, so they make a decision of
soucing those from other nations Change preposition
to
is
Asia, Correct your spelling
in
where
is well-known for planting many of them.
Another belief is that Correct word choice
which
reasearching
and producing the same but suitable genetically modified plant breeds can bring Correct your spelling
researching
to
better Change preposition
apply
resulr
compared to Correct your spelling
results
result
bying
from abroad. It is true, but the duration Correct your spelling
buying
for
Change preposition
of
this
effort is noticable
and the result will not come out Correct your spelling
noticeable
at
the first try. Change preposition
on
Instead
, importing overseas shortens much of time
and effort Correct article usage
the time
foe
the government and Correct your spelling
for
citizen
to easily get. Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
For instance
, for
a mutant watermelon that could grow well in Change preposition
apply
cold
area has Correct article usage
a cold
spent
about 2 years to achieve, Verb problem
taken
whereas
delivering from specialized
region by plane Correct article usage
a specialized
just
Rephrase
apply
take
only around one or two months.
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
To conclude
, owing to the short time
consumption and higher capability, bringing vegetables from abroad by airship can be considered as an acceptable option, in spite of noticeable
number of people who choose to Change the article
a noticeable
the noticeable
plants
Wrong verb form
plant
genetical
vegetables.Replace the word
genetic
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